HEALING AMERICA

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            Some of us are influencers, some of us are warriors, some of us are pray-ers, some of us are writers, and some of us are other categories or multiples of categories. I think of myself as a writer, with a little of the pray-er mixed in.

            Like you, for some time I have been concerned about our country: the division, the hypocrisy, the corruption, the lawlessness, the increasing poverty and homelessness, the immorality, the “me, me, me, and mine” attitude so many of us have developed. As George Washington said in his farewell address (September 19, 1796): 

“Of all the dispositions and habits which lead to political prosperity, religion and morality are indispensable supports. In vain would that man claim the tribute of patriotism who should labor to subvert these great pillars of human happiness, these firmest props of the duties of men and citizens.”

            Our issues in America have become so loud and the questions for fixing these issues so broad, we are overwhelmed. The failures show that the self-aggrandizing wisdom of most of the people offering solutions amounts to foolishness (I Corinthians 1:25, 3:19-20). All we need do is look at history, in every science and discipline, to see brilliance turned to catastrophic failure and valid solutions ignored or quashed. I am nonplussed by the series “Mysteries of the Abandoned” with its historical examples of ingenious ideas that were utter failures. Or reading stories of great business leaders who led their company to ruin, then were paid a fortune to leave. As my friend says, you need to “read, read, read from all perspectives and think for yourselves” to see the outcomes of past decisions for discernment to make future decisions.

          Thinking as a writer about what can be done, I don’t have the wisdom to make wise suggestions. Knowing that my opinions often differ from influencers and warriors and pray-ers, other writers and categories of people—I’ve thought it better to keep quiet publicly. Yet, I’ve often spoken out in frustration and criticism with close friends.

            In the last few days, I’ve read some verses that have given me a new perspective and I feel compelled to share some thoughts—hoping that they will be useful to the aforementioned groups who care about such things. I’m not going to include the verses, I will leave searching them out to you to read in your preferred translation (mine is the New American Standard Bible).

Pray for Governing Authorities

          Jesus called us to pray for our enemies (Matthew 5:44) and we are to pray for those with authority (I Timothy 2:1-6). Excuse me? I’m supposed to pray for those in power that I completely disagree with? What?? Even those I think are liars and corrupt and evil? Don’t we just work to vote them out or impeach them? Don’t we persuade others through pointing out the fallacies in their thinking (as opposed to ours) or ridiculing them when they disagree? Although to date, that doesn’t seem to have worked well for any political side. And our divide continues to grow… While the immorality and evil become even more pervasive… 

          So no one has authority to rule unless God allows it (Romans 13:1-7)? Then why is He allowing these crooks control? If I am understanding correctly—bad rulers (who God gave authority to) are a way of opening our eyes and chastising, correcting bad (immoral and sinful) behavior—the purpose being to call us back to Him. As evil permeates the world, it appears past time for examining our country and once again seeking God’s mercy, His favor, His guidance; re-examining His precepts and who He has called us to be as an individual, as a nation.

          Do we rise up in arms? Do we call out to God to deliver us? In this time would God even fight for us (Exodus 14:13-14)? Or will He call us to do both—pray and standup for righteousness and for our country—perhaps like He called Joshua, David, Gideon?

          I am not wise enough to know the answer. I just know it begins with crying to God in humble prayer (II Chronicles 7:13-15) to lead us out of this turmoil.

Praying for America

            Yet, this has been too large a prayer for me, since I don’t officially fall under the pray-er category? Where do I even begin? I’m just someone perplexed and dissatisfied with the direction things are going. And I don’t even know what to pray? Then I found Daniel. Now Daniel knew how to pray for his people (Daniel 9:3-19). He confessed the wrongs they’d committed and prayed for the cessation of evil and for the people to return to God, for God’s mercy and God’s favor to return to His people.

            If you, like me, find these times overwhelming, perhaps like me, you would find Daniel’s prayer a helpful guide in praying for America. Praying for America to return to a country built on a strong Christian/Judeo foundation—still believing in our Pledge of Allegiance, “…one Nation under God…”.[1]

A second quote from George Washington’s farewell address and maintaining morality through the foundation of religion:

“And let us with caution indulge the supposition that morality can be maintained without religion. Whatever may be conceded to the influence of refined education on minds of peculiar structure, reason and experience both forbid us to expect that national morality can prevail in exclusion of religious principle.” 


[1] Addition of “under God” proposed to Congress by President Eisenhower, 1954. Retrieved March 30, 2022 at https://www.ushistory.org/documents/pledge.htm

A Rant About Novel Serializations

I just finished 4 audiobooks. I had listened to the second one a couple of times and liked the character, and thought I liked the author. I pulled together 4 of her books using this character that were written over several years.

I could barely get through them. There was so much repetition it made me nuts. I think she took huge sections and just copied them into the next book to explain stuff that happened in the first book. I got to where I was just fast forwarding to get through those sections. And I couldn’t believe that a character I liked turned out to be so illogical. She was a Superior Court judge, after years of being a prosecutor, and I kept thinking “How could she be this stupid?” The final few paragraphs almost redeemed the books, almost. Overall, I felt the author was bored with the story and the character and thought it was a quick way to turn out a new book.

Note to self: 1) In a series find new ways to tell about important past experiences–don’t repeat! 2) Don’t give your character a high-profile job and then make her/his actions defy logic. It’s okay to be dumb if you don’t know the field, but don’t say how intelligent the character is to cover up the really stupid things he/she does.

Rant over.

“Writers need to put skin in the game…”

 

…and money.

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?

I’d already had a bad day when I read that comment initiating a LinkedIn post by a neophyte publisher. Not only did she make egregious errors in her post, but she insulted writers at our basic level. When she received a response commenting on her misuse of words, you could almost hear her giggle as she noted that she always gets those words mixed up. Never mind the misspellings and poor grammar she used. Yes, you will find misspellings and grammatical mistakes in my work, but I’m not putting myself out there as a publisher or offering to copyedit anyone. So I lambasted her–and later discovered that she’d removed the post.

But let’s talk about skin in the game.

What do publishers and agents think we do all day? How many hours did you spend on that book that wasn’t even acknowledged? How many months and years?

And money? How much money have you spent on office supplies and technology and websites and books and research and…and…and…How much unpaid time did you use up instead of spending time doing something that actually paid you?

And that doesn’t even get into the emotional cost.

Skin in the game? Next time you are negotiating a contract, ask your agent or your publisher how much skin they are willing to put in the game.

Creative Writing 101

My Writers Digest University class starts a new 12-week course on Thursday, October 23. If you’d like more information, or to register for the class, go to http://register.writersonlineworkshops.com/Course?CourseId=1120-10. I hope to read you there!

Master’s Workshop: 5 Keys for Fixing Your Story

September 27, 2014

WC2 Masters Workshops – 3 One-Day Masters Workshops with Art Holcomb, Ace Antonio Hall, or Nancy Ellen Dodd, Los Angeles Valley College, CA
http://www.wcwriters.com/workshops

Nancy’s Workshop: “5 Keys for Fixing Your Story”

Frustrated by your progress? Wondering if you’ll ever be able to figure out the problems so you can get your story published or produced? The goal of this class is to teach you 5 Keys that will help you figure out what you are trying to write about and how to write it in the best way you can.

The 5 Keys covered are:

  • Where are you in story development?
  • Which voice should you use?
  • How do you punch up the characters?
  • How do you figure out where to begin the story?
  • How do you incorporate details, background, and flashbacks?

Author, teacher, and writer Nancy Ellen Dodd will help “you” analyze your story, the problems you need to address, and your next steps toward completion. This workshop includes advanced material not available in her book The Writer’s Compass: From Story Map to Finished Draft in 7 Stages. This is a writing and lecture class. Examples will come from participating student’s work during the class and pages submitted in advance.

You’re Invited Inside for a Peek

The Writing Nut publishes a blog about writers and their writing space and rituals. July 9 she featured me with pictures of my writing work space, including my 5′ nutcracker, and some of my thoughts about finding time and the rituals of writing. The blog can be found http://www.thewritingnut.com/wednesday-writers-workspace/wednesday-writers-workspace-welcomes-nancy-ellen-dodd/

 

Conventions of the Screenplay

For those of you interested, tomorrow starts my 8-week online screenwriting class, “Conventions of the Screenplay,” through Screenwriters University. See the full description at:
http://swu.register.fwmedia.com/Course?CourseId=7016-4&utm_source=SUPromo&utm_medium=wid&utm_campaign=kahsuwid022014

My Upcoming Conferences

GLAWS – February 8-9, 2014
The Greater Los Angeles Writers’ Society – Genre LA
Los Angeles Valley College
http://www.wcwriters.com/sponsors/sponsors.html

San Miguel Writer’s Conference 2014 – February 13-17

Conference on Creative Writing at Pacific – June 20-22
University of the Pacific – Stockton Campus

Teaching New Online Class

I am teaching a new Writer’s Digest 12-week session, “Creative Writing 101,” starting October 17, 2013. If interested, go to the following link for more information:

http://wdu.register.fwmedia.com/Course?CourseId=1120-2&utm_source=WDUPromo&utm_medium=wid&utm_campaign=wdukrwid101113

Can You Really Become a Writer?

Read my blog posted on the Writer’s Digest website and find how you can go from a wannabe to a writer.

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